The date was September 14th, the year 2053, this would be the day the world would change forever. In the recent years science had grown closer to the dream of Virtual Reality, several games and the like. Now, while some may be believing that this shall be yet another Virtual Reality Game story, No. Instead how about bringing the Game to Reality.---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Okay! First story I will be writing in the history of ever! ^^ Now I understand that me saying that may not be too reassuring for a great story to look forward too, but I hope that everyone will offer constructive criticism and advice so I may grow my seed of ability into a towering tree of awesomeness and stuff! >:D But enough of my babbling! On with the story! Statistics Overall Score .star-3681-overall-9a29960bb82e46b5afdefc0558ca9462:after{ width: 0% } Style Score Story Score Grammar Score Character Score Total Views : 9,109 Average Views : 1,518 Followers : 19 Favorites : 6 Ratings : 0 Pages : 50 Advertisement Go to Table of Contents Mark as Not Interested Follow Favorite Read Later Fiction breaking rules? Report Advertisement Author