this is a story about the first soul.this soul was created prior to the light and darkness soul rivers .--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------First this is my second writing novel. so be not to harsh.Second English is not my first language.Third i got Dyslexia so sometimes it will be a bit of a mess. Statistics Overall Score .star-5313-overall-51a35abb4265434faad2e80cb7e276fb:after{ width: 0% } Style Score Story Score Grammar Score Character Score Total Views : 1,638 Average Views : 819 Followers : 4 Favorites : 0 Ratings : 0 Pages : 7 Advertisement Go to Table of Contents Mark as Not Interested Follow Favorite Read Later Fiction breaking rules? Report Advertisement Author