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Well. We got another review on 'The Legend of Axiom'.
This story is posted elsewhere by the author. Help them out by reading the authentic version.
I am not too surprised.
"No internal consistency of existence"
'Maybe that’s the point of the story but even then it could’ve been told better. I can’t tell whether you’re trying to explore metaphysics and ontology or if you just want to write a Gary Stu because you picked the most untraditional way possible to write a power fantasy but it’s still just a really bad power fantasy.'
They rated it the lowest half star rating. I have to say, this is far better then simply leaving a half star and not reviewing. When writing 'The Legend of Axiom'. I mainly wanted to write about a MC that was OP and created their own goldenfinger. I liked this aspect in my book 'Origin of Calamity'.
I am a fan of MC's making their own goldenfingers. But if you are going to make something overpowered. You should have some sort of foundation.
I had thought I had improved as a writer over these last few years. I think I did alright for a writathon.
I am curious where they think I could have improved!
In these stages. I like to infuse 'insights' and 'memories'. So todays stage will be dedicated to this review.
If I were to rate their review. I'd give it a 1.5/5. The points they got is due to them at least putting their opinion out there. But they didn't really provide any useful feedback at all...
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