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New story out

  Hey all,

  New story out. I've uploaded 11 chapters so far, and will be releasing an additional chapter daily.

  I'd greatly appreciate it if you checked it out.

  Out of respect for you time, I'll give a one-line summary of it:

  Penguins + Cultivation + LitRPG = New story

  If you're interested, this is the to its page. It's part action, comedy, adventure, all that jazz.

  If you're wondering about the state of Get out of my body!, I'd say it's effectively dropped. It was an incredibly tough decision to make given how much I loved the story, but it felt like something I needed to do all the same.

  If you encounter this tale on Amazon, note that it's taken without the author's consent. Report it.

  At the end of the day, I felt I wasn't doing service for that story which I'd thoroughly planned out and invested so much into. Essentially a case of return to the whiteboard to see if I can iterate it into something that works better, which is why I say effectively dropped. There were 5 books planned for it, and I'd only made it halfway through the first book - which I also felt was the toughest bit to get through, which I didn't help by having Cal and Penbrooke go by themselves.

  Perhaps this will come of as surprising, but it was always supposed to be a sitcom comedy with a main party who travel through the world, not a case of Cal and Penbrooke and a cast of minor characters. But I made the decision to have Cal and Penbrooke by themselves for the first part, thinking it'd help show their characters more - which I now strongly regret. There's a reason why Luffy meets Zoro so quick instead of their meeting coming at episode 50.

  Someday, I hope to share the improved version with y'all. In the meantime, I'd appreciate if you could give the new story a go: it's not a full comedy like Get out of my body! was, but it's halfway there and the exact same type of humour (

  Muchas gracias,

  Cogs

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