This chapter is for leaving feedback on the current book as a whole!!! Are there any interactions that startled you while reading or scenes that you think need improving or reworking? Were there any plot holes or unexplained portions you think deserve more explanation? Leave any important feedback you want! I'm going to stop working soon, and I'll have alot more time to address the previous portions!

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