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Chapter 11 - Gates of Vaelthorn

  David

  The caravan slowed as the walls of the capital came into view, massive, weathered stone rising like the backbone of a mountain range against the gray morning sky. Flags of Vaelthorn fluttered in the wind from the parapets, and a steady line of travelers, wagons, and riders moved toward the arched gates that divided the outer wall.

  We stepped off the last wagon just beyond the hill's crest, joining the line of arrivals. Soldiers in iron-blue cloaks walked along the queue with tired eyes, their hands resting on sword hilts more out of habit than threat. Seraphina adjusted the strap of her pack and slipped her hand into mine without a word.

  I surveyed the other travelers, mostly tired merchants, pilgrims, or farmers with carts loaded with trade goods. At first, everything looked normal. But then I spotted him, the man in the cloak.

  He hadn’t said a word the whole trip. He sat quietly nearby, rode in silence, and vanished at stops. Now he was two wagons back in line. Not rushing, not out of place, but watching, even if he acted like he wasn't.

  [Perception Triggered]

  I attempted to analyze him again. The same result.

  [Error: No readable data]

  I turned back to Seraphina. “We’re being followed.”

  She didn’t flinch. “Him?”

  I nodded. “Same cloak. Same silence. He never sleeps, or if he does, he does it with one eye open.”

  “We’ll deal with it later,” she whispered. “We’re almost through.”

  Ahead, the line inched forward. Our turn.

  The analyze popups kept flickering in the corner of my vision, names, races, and classes vanishing after a few seconds like embers burning out. I’d spent half the caravan trip here poking at the skill, forcing them to return to see if I could. Turns out, once you’ve seen someone’s info, it doesn’t pop up again unless you call it back. A one-and-done feature. Efficient. Practical. Almost… considerate.

  Good thinking, I told myself, though I wasn’t sure whether I meant it for myself or the system.

  A young guard waved us up. “Names and where from?”

  “David and Seraphina Robertson from Brackenreach.”

  “Purpose of visit?”

  “Seeking Guild registration,” I said.

  The guard raised an eyebrow at that, jotted something in the ledger, and then stamped the parchment with a wax seal. “Don’t cause trouble,” he muttered, handing it back.

  We walked through the stone arch and entered the fortress city of Vaelthorn.

  Seraphina gently bumped her shoulder against mine. “You called me Seraphina Robertson.”

  I glanced at her. “Yeah. Thought it might keep things simpler.”

  She smiled, soft and sly. “Didn’t say I minded. Just wasn’t expecting it to sound that nice.”

  The road beyond the gate opened into a wide cobblestone boulevard, bordered by buildings that leaned with age and character. Large Tudor-style structures, multi-storied and packed closely on both sides, featured timber frames and whitewashed walls, giving the entire area a storybook charm. Upper floors extended over narrow storefronts, while wooden signs swung from iron brackets, advertising inns, apothecaries, and smithies with hand-painted glyphs and curling script.

  Seraphina paused mid-step, her mouth slightly open as she took everything in. “It’s beautiful.”

  It’s something,” I said, though my voice carried more curiosity than awe.

  She turned to me. “You don’t sound impressed.”

  “I am. Just. I’ve been to other cities.” I gave a slight shrug. “But it’s got something they don’t. It feels alive. Like it knows it’s been standing for hundreds of years and doesn’t care if you’re impressed.”

  She glanced at me sideways. “You just had to ruin the magic, didn’t you?”

  I grinned. “A little. At least they don’t have trash in the streets like some cities I have been to.”

  She laughed. “You know how to set a tone.”

  We stepped aside to let a wagon full of crates pass, the driver barking orders at a pair of weary oxen. Then I noticed a city guard standing at the corner near a bronze statue of a winged lion. He looked bored enough to be helpful.

  “Excuse me,” I said. “We’re looking for a place to stay. Got any recommendations?”

  He took a long look at us, then nodded. “Aye. You’ve got a few options. Keep climbing Highmarket Street. The Copper Candle is pretty decent at two silver a night, clean beds, and no rats. If you’ve got coin to spare, try the Queen’s Rose near the fountain square, they are at four silver, but you’ll be sleeping on silk. Or if you’re saving your coppers, there’s a bunkhouse by the east wall. It’s loud, but dry.”

  Seraphina leaned in. “Copper Candle sounds fair.”

  “Agreed,” I said. I gave the guard a nod. “Thanks.”

  He waved it off. “Just don’t make trouble, and the city won’t trouble you.”

  As we started to leave, I looked back over my shoulder. The cloaked figure was gone. Maybe lurking somewhere close.

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  Aria Devanthes

  Blah blah blah.

  That was all I heard from Halden, Halden Sinthurk, the other Royal Mage. He’d been obsessing over the Valen family for weeks now. I didn’t know why, and frankly, I didn’t care. Something they possessed, something he wanted, and his convenient engagement to Marlena Valen was his chosen key. He talked. Carthis nodded. Carthis drank.

  I stared down the street and pretended to listen. That’s when I saw him. No, someone.

  He was tall, broad-shouldered, built like a warrior rather than a court fixture. There was nothing ostentatious about him, yet he stood out in a way I couldn’t immediately place. Curious, I twisted my fingers subtly and invoked mage sight, a simple spell in theory, infuriatingly demanding to master.

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  Information bloomed across my vision. Everyone around him shimmered with the familiar threads of mana and identity, except him.

  Nothing. No aura. No signature. No status. Just… absence. That made me focus.

  He was speaking to a woman. Seraphina Robertson. A villager. I frowned slightly. Did she know who, or what, she was talking to? Or was he hiding just as well from her?

  Interesting. Seraphina Robertson, I thought. Now I want to know more about you, too.

  “What do you think, Aria?” Halden asked suddenly, setting his drink down with a clink. “You weren’t listening, were you?”

  “Oh… no,” I replied absently, my eyes still on the man who shouldn’t have been invisible.“Distracted.”

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  David

  As we moved along the busy street, four silhouettes rose above the city skyline, towering over everything around them. Two of these were skyscrapers, tall and narrow, their surfaces decorated with unusual architectural ridges that caught the sunlight. The other two looked like cathedrals, with high pointed arches and Gothic spires piercing the clouds. None of them seemed like places someone would casually wander into.

  I slowed as we went between rows of vendors and tradesmen. “You see those buildings?” I asked.

  Seraphina followed my gaze and nodded. “I’ve only ever heard of them. The one on the right is the royal castle, and the other is the church. The towers, I’m not sure. Could be the mages.”

  I held her hand more firmly as we moved through the morning rush until we reached a large timber-framed building with deep green trim and warmly stained glass windows. Above the door, a hand-painted sign showed a thick, melted candle with curling smoke rising from the words: The Copper Candle.

  “This must be the place,” I said.

  Seraphina exhaled gently. “It looks cozy.”

  “I’ll take cozy. Even better, if we don’t have to share with something with four legs.”

  She gave me a sideways look and swatted my arm. “One spider and you’re traumatized for life.”

  “It was so large....” I smiled and pushed open the heavy wooden door, hearing the creaking hinges and feeling the warmth of conversation. The scent of woodsmoke, ale, and baked bread greeted us instantly.

  The inn’s interior was warmly lit by lanterns in iron sconces, their glow flickering over the polished beams above. A stone hearth took up much of the far wall, its flames crackling around a spit-roasted ham. The crowd inside wasn’t noisy, mostly merchants, a few travelers, and what seemed to be a pair of off-duty guards sipping mugs at the bar.

  A woman at the front desk glanced up from her ledger. She was middle-aged, sharp-eyed, with gray curls tucked under a faded red headscarf. Her dress, typical of the region’s tavern keepers, hung just low enough at the neckline to make it clear that tips were part of the business model.

  Her skin had a sun-warmed tone, speckled with freckles that stretched across her chest and shoulders. I found myself unconsciously tracking their pattern one, two, three before her eyes locked with mine.

  “Looking for a room or a meal?” the woman behind the counter asked, her eyes darting between the two of us.

  “A room, if you have one,” I replied.

  There was a pause, just a beat too long, as she looked at Seraphina and then back at me.

  Seraphina must have noticed it too. Her cheeks tinged with color. “We, we’re married,” she said quickly, brushing a strand of hair behind her ear. “Only recently. We’re still getting used to saying it out loud.”

  The innkeeper’s expression softened. “Ah,” she said with a knowing smile. “Congratulations, then. First time in the capital?”

  “Yes,” I said. “We’re planning to visit the crafting guild tomorrow. Do you know where that is?”

  “The guild? Five streets north, one west. Can’t miss it, big stone building, wide steps.” She slid a ledger across the counter and licked the tip of her pencil. “Now, about your stay… you’re in luck. We’ve got one private room left. Otherwise, it’s the bunkroom, and I don’t think you want that. Most of the wagons rolled out two days ago, so the place is quieter than usual. Room and board’s six silvers a night, meals included. Bath’s extra. How long are you planning to stay?”

  “Two weeks.” I laid a gold coin on the counter and nudged it toward her.

  She scooped it up quick as a sparrow, counted out the change with practiced fingers, and slid a brass key across the polished wood. “Third floor, second door on the right. Breakfast bell’s at dawn.”

  “Thank you,” I said.

  She nodded. “Enjoy your stay. And each other.”

  Seraphina’s blush deepened as we faced the stairs.

  I unlocked the door and pushed it open, letting Seraphina go first. After scanning the area and using my skills, I was confident that no one was following or watching. Then I entered and locked the door.

  “Not bad,” Seraphina said, surveying the room as she took off her cloak and cover, then messing up her hair. The room was modest, clean, quiet, and simple. A single bed rested against the far wall, adorned with a handmade quilt, the only splash of color in the otherwise sparse space. Two wooden chairs sat beside a small table. Hooks lined one wall, waiting for cloaks or bags. Everything carried a faint cedar scent.

  I sat down in one of the chairs and leaned forward to take off my boots. It was the first time in days that I let my feet breathe, and I exhaled with relief as my toes stretched.

  When I looked up, Seraphina sat on the edge of the bed, grimacing as she struggled with one of her boots.

  “Wait, wait, let me help,” I said, rising and reaching for her outstretched foot.

  I gently grabbed her ankle and slipped off the stubborn boot. Her sock came next, revealing her bare foot, pink from the day’s walk.

  Seraphina immediately tried to pull back. “David,” she started, cheeks coloring.

  “Just trust me,” I said softly, cradling her foot in both hands. I began to rub in slow circles with my thumbs along the arch, working out the knots the road had left behind. She stiffened at first, tension in her shoulders, that half-hold of breath. Then it left her in a quiet exhale.

  “That’s unfair,” she muttered, eyes fluttering shut.

  I smiled without answering and continued on. Her toes flexed once and then relaxed completely.

  “You don’t have to spoil me,” she said eventually, her voice now quieter, softer than before.

  “You did proclaim that you are my wife. Also, I don’t consider this spoiling you,” I said, gently pressing into the ball of her foot. “Just wait. You haven’t seen spoiling yet.”

  She laughed, tired and genuine, the laugh people only give when they finally let their guard down.

  “Also,” I added, glancing up at her, “you’ve earned it.”

  “There’s another foot waiting,” she reminded me, a playful tilt in her voice as she raised an eyebrow.

  I grinned and reached for it. “Demanding now, are we?”

  She leaned back against the headboard, eyes half-closed. “I’m married. I’m allowed.”

  “Fair point,” I said, taking the second foot in my hands. “Let the spoiling continue.”

  She watched me work quietly, her breathing slowing as my thumbs gently pressed into the arch of her foot. The tension in her shoulders gradually eased until she finally leaned her head back, her red hair spilling across the quilt like soft threads of fire.

  “This is dangerous,” she murmured after a moment, her voice barely above a whisper.

  I paused. “Dangerous?”

  She lifted her head, her eyes meeting mine. “Because it’s so easy to forget the world outside this room. To forget the reasons we came here.”

  I nodded, still holding her foot in my hands. “Maybe that’s not a bad thing. Just for tonight.”

  Her lips curled into a faint smile, but her eyes remained serious. “Do you ever wonder what we’re doing? What we’re heading toward?”

  “Every hour,” I admitted. “Since the forge. Since the skill. Since I realized nothing about this place is what I expected.”

  “And me?” she asked, her voice almost timid.

  I looked at her completely now, not just as someone I’d met in this unfamiliar world, not only as a friend or companion, but as someone whose presence had quietly become part of the rhythm of my heartbeat.

  “You make it real,” I said. “You’re the one thing I don’t have to question.”

  She blinked hard. A breath caught in her throat. Then, quietly, she leaned forward and kissed me, not rushed, not fiery. Just still, steady, and warm. When we pulled apart, her forehead rested against mine. “Then maybe we’re both allowed to forget the world. Just for tonight.”

  We sat in silence once more, our hands still grasped, the space between us filled with unspoken understanding. Outside, the city sounds faded into quiet, and for the first time in a long while, the weight we carried felt just a little lighter.

  Seraphina slid out of bed and faced me, her bare feet silent on the wooden floor. Her eyes searched mine, steady and vulnerable. Then, without a word, she reached for her dress strap and let it go. The soft fabric slipped down her body, pooling quietly at her feet.

  She didn’t move or cover herself. She stood there, shoulders back, breathing steadily, watching me watch her. There was no hesitation, only quiet courage that spoke louder than words.

  “I’ve never,” she began, then paused, brushing a strand of hair behind her ear. “I didn’t think I’d feel this safe with anyone.”

  I rose and moved toward her slowly. I didn’t reach out immediately. Just being close to her, feeling the warmth between us, was enough to narrow the world down to the space we shared.

  “You don’t have to prove anything to me,” I said. “Not tonight. Not ever.”

  “I know,” she whispered. “But I want to be here. With you. Just like this.”

  My hands found hers, and I gently pulled her toward the bed. We moved slowly, unsure yet truthful. There was no plan, just shared breath, gentle touches, small smiles, and that kind of silence full of understanding.

  Under the weight of the quilt, the room vanished. All that remained was the flicker of lantern light on skin and the warmth of two people finding solace where they hadn’t known they needed it.

  No fanfare. No system alert. Just closeness. Genuine and perfectly human.

  Later, as Seraphina slept beside me, I stayed awake in the quiet, my arm gently draped around her. The inn's sounds had faded into a soft hum: distant laughter from the taproom, the creak of floorboards above, and the gentle hiss of the wind passing by the shutters.

  I reflected on the hidden class of mine, the guild, and the cloaked man who had gotten on the same wagon only to disappear into the crowd once we reached our destination. There was something about his movements that was deliberate, as if he were counting each step.

  Tomorrow, we will visit the crafting guild. Maybe we’ll find answers. Perhaps we’ll face more questions. Either way, the journey has started. I feel there will be no turning back.

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